Talk:DebConf11/Travel-Visa

I've just edited the text to tidy up the english a bit, with my changes in [brackets] since the whole page is a quote from the referred to document.

The one sentence I cannot clean up is:

Besides having travel document and a proper identity card proving identity and citizenship, the nationals of the following countries may enter Bosnia and Herzegovina:

because it's not at all clear what they mean.

I'm guessing that they're offering rights similar to those granted by the Schengen Agreement to the listed countries, but I wouldn't want to rely in that from reading this sentence. I hesitate to suggest a better wording, since it is so unclear what is meant.

It's possible that these edits would be helpful to the MFA if we have a way of giving them feedback --Fil 10:02, 5 May 2011 (UTC)